Traceability record for Statement responding to serious criticism — amendment proposal 13

Trace record

Class

PROPOSAL_TO_DECISION_TRACE

Proposal

EVI-PSA-013

Source class

LOCAL_ILLUSTRATIVE_STATEMENT_AMENDMENT

Stakeholder interest

non-domination researcher

Final decision

ACCEPTED

Decision

—

State

—

Record hash

ce4401e215b70160d8cac2fa0c1d8af31a06cc8ea2137e0d08ae890cb2aee4f3

Objection, concession, and evidence

Objection: The proposed wording could be read as broader than the available public evidence.

Concession: The amendment must preserve the strongest valid criticism and narrow any claim that exceeds evidence or institutional authority.

• {"path": "/docs/long-term-memory/architecture/v2.23-public-statement-history.json", "recordId": "EVI-PS-013", "scope": "Append-only statement history and critique context."}
• {"path": "/docs/long-term-memory/architecture/v2.22-structural-power-and-non-domination.json", "scope": "Non-domination and concentration-risk review."}

Decision and unresolved questions

Local illustrative review period is recorded closed; no external consultation is claimed.

• What additional public evidence would justify a stronger claim without collapsing governance into operations?

Static local traceability record only. It creates no law, policy, legal right, official diplomatic position, enacted statement, external submission, or live public consultation.